Well, this one we CAN blame it on the moon .. right Bob Seger? Not his beard though!
Made this one the other day for Amberstar. I wrote this as if I actually WAS her daughter, and used my own daughter as an influence. I was a big fan of the picture, the yoga pants drew me in, and the rest of it lead to the story. I think it has just the right amount of embarrassment balanced with a loving nature between the dad and daughter. I definitely didn't want to go too overboard in any direction.
I think it's the right amount of text as well. I needed to tell an actual story this time around. I used what shorthand I could as far as illuminating the coming menstruation cycle, but I didn't want to skimp out on the actions David was going through involuntarily. I wanted to show it and emphasize it as best I could, that the compulsions were moving him forward towards femininity.
All in all, I like this one a lot. You results may vary. Let me know what you think?