Make sure you have an endgame the next time you try to control someone's mind!
Only have a few minutes here so I will make this quick. Did this caption the other day. Wasn't that impressed with it, but it's something I'd probably give a grade of C- or so. I think the idea was much better than the execution to be honest. Then again, perhaps the main character is too vile to really carry the story in any way. Yes, things don't work out for him .. but still, he's pretty much a predator out to force himself onto others that he helped to create.
I'll have something posted towards the weekend. Finally seems like Spring is kinda here, though we seem to have skipped it and went from highs in the 40's to high's in the mid to upper 80's!