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Someone's Honeymoon Night Comes True .. Maybe Not Evan's Dream Though!

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Or maybe it DOES come true?!? Your results may vary! Not valid in Vatican City or Provo, Utah!


I wrote this as an exercise in descriptive writing and trying to make a bit smuttier style than I usually do. I have an idea, but I'm not sure what happened to invoke this change of events. I'm leaning towards one of Evan's friends, maybe projecting some of his issues onto Evan and Dawn's nuptials, but I'm definitely open to other interpretations! Tell me what you think below?

I had to edit it down a bit, to keep it from having the text be too small, as I originally wrote it on the fly. i had some sort of "Where am I?" thought Evan, or while glancing down at his body, "Maybe it should be 'Who am I?" which is a great opening line I think, but once I had determined Evan was in Dawn's body, well, a version of Dawn's body dressed much sexier than usual, I didn't need it, so I adjusted it somewhat. I might end up using that opening somewhere else if I can remember it! Probably could have gotten a bit more exposition into the story, but I loved the second paragraph so much, that I couldn't leave it out, plus it played once again into his fiance not quite being the fiance that she previously was. Then it was off to the smutty races with the rest of the caption!

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When you comment down below, or on another blog .. do you go back a day or two later to see if there's been a response? I was just wondering as I tend to respond to everyone here .. as that is just a common courtesy in my opinion .. and when I comment elsewhere, I look to see if anyone followed up on what I've said. I wasn't sure so I figured I would ask everyone and that they'd be honest.



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