Sometimes you just might be in the wrong place at the wrong time!
Had this image saved, and wasn't sure how exactly I was going to use it, other than it would come in handy for a "First Anniversary / Birthday" of a rebirth into femininity. So that is how I approached it when I started writing it out in a caption format.
The first two paragraphs were easy to setup, and the thought was that Dee was Skip's daughter before whatever happened to him that I was about to write. But then, I just wondered how exactly would he have become like that .. and in the third paragraph I set up what hopefully would have been the payoff.
I knew that I wanted him to be a slave to whatever fate I had set up for him, but it'd have to have been a powerful force to get him in that position. Then I thought about what would happen if I threw together a couple of events that focused a bunch of young feminine exuberant emotions into a small area .. all at the same time. It'd definitely be a catalyst for a strong wave of girly power that could accumulate and disperse in interesting ways. So I went with it.
I think the only problem is that I really didn't have a way to tie it all together in the ending, and wrap things up into a nice (pink) bow. I guess that referencing the image itself would do it, but I started with a cake that Dee got her .. it'd have been good if I could bring that around again. And I could have figured something out with icing / frosting, or cake / baking puns .. but I couldn't think of a rim-shot moment, so I decided to leave it as it is now.
Anyone want to tackle how I should have ended it? I'm definitely up for people to take a crack at it. Let me know your ideas below, and feel free to offer thoughts on the caption as it is right now.